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A lot of experimentation going on with this page. New color tone, some new angles, and panel breakdowns. I’m enjoying splitting the pages in half, but having the panel arrangements in each half each be unique. Hopefully, it’s clear storytelling.
Two things I’m happiest with on this page: First, Stan Lee in Panel 1 (’cause drawing dogs isn’t my strong suit) and second, the reverse near silhoutte Panel 3. Because of the order of the conversation in that panel (Felix needed to speak first) the best way to arrange that is for Felix to be on the left. However, I already established him as on the right. What to do?
Well…reverse the camera angle and have a shot from behind. Voila. (That tip is free guys!)
good panel trick on silhouette.
like the flow and organization of this page! also the different scales of the panels. great job!
Panel 2 – This woman cannot lie to save her life.